Score: 8

"It's been done."

submission: Base Defence 2 Monster

date: September 15, 2005

The biggest improvement that could be made to this one is more variety in the enemies. Other than that, it was pretty good.

The sign was a nice touch. :D

Score: 5

"Average."

submission: Save The Village

date: June 21, 2005

The idea has been done, and it has been done much better. Other than that, the only real problem is the hit detection on the little bombs.

Score: 7

"Fuck you. XD"

submission: Goth Boy

date: May 22, 2005

Another good entry, too bad I didn't catch it earlier. You still need to work on sound quality. It's clear enough to understand, but there's still room for improvement. Instead of just opening with a window zoom with the song playing, having a singer in the coffee shop would have been nice. From the looks of it, the eyeliner was supposed to look bad, as is typical for the "Wah, woe is me, omg Hot Topic!" group.

As shown by your previous work, you've got obvious drawing talent, it just doesn't come out as smoothly in flash. When it comes to fixing that, my only suggestion is practice. <3