Score: 8

"It's been done."

submission: Base Defence 2 Monster

date: September 15, 2005

The biggest improvement that could be made to this one is more variety in the enemies. Other than that, it was pretty good.

The sign was a nice touch. :D

Score: 5

"Average."

submission: Save The Village

date: June 21, 2005

The idea has been done, and it has been done much better. Other than that, the only real problem is the hit detection on the little bombs.

Score: 7

"Fuck you. XD"

submission: Goth Boy

date: May 22, 2005

Another good entry, too bad I didn't catch it earlier. You still need to work on sound quality. It's clear enough to understand, but there's still room for improvement. Instead of just opening with a window zoom with the song playing, having a singer in the coffee shop would have been nice. From the looks of it, the eyeliner was supposed to look bad, as is typical for the "Wah, woe is me, omg Hot Topic!" group.

As shown by your previous work, you've got obvious drawing talent, it just doesn't come out as smoothly in flash. When it comes to fixing that, my only suggestion is practice. <3

Score: 7

"Decent take on an old concept, but..."

submission: Engulfer v0.75

date: May 20, 2005

The hit detection is a little off, and some of the blobs spawn outside of the spawn box. For this type of game, a health bar isn't needed, as it's an eat or be eaten situation. However, a couple of extra lives could be beneficial. At any rate, improve on the graphics, and maybe add a background. Obstacles would be nice, as it'd be something different, but you'd need to make sure the enemies couldn't pass through them as well.

Score: 8

"Very informative"

submission: Landmines

date: May 19, 2005

Nice work, your description certainly was accurate. Thanks for including the list of organisations give donations to for mine removal purposes. Overall it was well done, kudos.

Score: 7

"One thing..."

submission: Internet Junkiez

date: April 16, 2005

Improve the sound quality. Good stuff, poor sound quality notwithstanding.

Score: 9

"Mmmm, red wizard."

submission: Lord of the Hidden Rings

date: April 13, 2005

Surpisingly addictive, no real goal that I saw, but it works. A skipable cutscene with the red wizard up to some random mischief every few levels would be a nice reward and give it more replayability.

Score: 8

"Squeaky penguin!"

submission: Pope for a Day

date: April 12, 2005

Nice work. The voices were all nice and clear. My only gripe is the art, but that's neglible as it actually works with this particular piece.

Now give me a penguin. *squeak*

Score: 8

"Nice work."

submission: Color Me

date: March 18, 2005

It could have used a few more poses, maybe put that in as either a secret or standard option if you decide to do another. More hairstyles would have been nice, but overall, it was good stuff.

For the final secret, just click between her legs.

Score: 7

"Umm, pie."

submission: Mortal Kombat Kamidogu

date: February 7, 2005

It was okay, I suppose. The graphics could have used a little clarifying. So could Damashi's voice for that matter. Tone down on the voice distortion a bit. It really could have used being longer with some funny bits. Overall, it was a decent effort, it just needs some polish.